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I need help
Someone please rescue me
I can’t cry out for help
I will not speak
The answer lies in the roaring silence
Listen closely to the sound of no noise
Then you might hear the whispers of those who have betrayed me
Who left me alone in regret and loneliness
My heart filled up with emptiness
The color of my eyes are fading
The blood in my veins are draining
My skin is sickly pale
My thoughts are becoming thin
Words becoming meaningless
My soul is rotting from inside out
My spirit is shattered
There’s no use trying to fly with broken wings
I’m falling into nothingness
Into a prison of unhappiness
I write my pain upon the giant walls the keep me here
Trapped in sorrow
I softly sing in a trembling voice to block out the screams above me
Yet I am not afraid of the knives that cut me in my sleep
Some say that pain makes a person stronger
But that cannot be true
For I cannot get my hopes up
They are buried underground
I am endlessly lost in time
Light becomes all too bright
The darkness is my savior
The darkness is safety
The darkness has saved me.
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The poem is very powerful. I have felt the same way you have before in the last three lines (I know I've told you that before). It's very inspirational.
ReplyDeleteOkay......why haven't you shown me your poems??? This is really good! I love it!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so.....beautiful. So sad. As "Will" said very powerful.
haha thank you both :)
ReplyDelete"You must be strong now. You must never give up. And when people make you cry and you are afraid of the dark, don't forget the light is always there."
ReplyDeleteVery nice, always a fan!
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