I wrote this for my youngest brother. He's four years old right now. Please comment with any kind of feedback!
Sweet, charming, smart, wonderful, beautiful boy
Born in July
The smile of sunshine
Laughter like the sound of life
Blue eyes of a clear, summer sky
Warm, loving embraces
That make the whole world stop
And center around this little angel that fell from the stars
Make our hearts fill up with love for you
You’re a special one in every way
Without you life could never be as great
It would be so dull and dim without your radiant light
Little boy you are a blessing to us
You are a gift to everyone
Don’t ever think that you are not loved
Never believe in giving up
You will reach all your goals
You will live all your wildest dreams
Become all you desire to be
Realize how amazing you are
Never worry about pleasing others
Or living up to what you do not want to be
Be yourself
Be whoever you may be
Always do what is best for you
Be generous and kind
But do what you know is right
Do not let anyone bring you down
Tell you that you are not good enough
Or will not succeed
Live with all the life you have
Love with all your heart
Never regret any choices you make
Always be proud of who you are
And know that I, and many others will forever love you more than you will have ever thought possible.
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I love that little dude. I think it is very sweet of you to have wrote this for Ty. Keep up the good work. Don't forget you inspire me.
ReplyDeleteTy is super cute! You should save this and show it to him when hes older.
ReplyDeletehaha thank you. and yea im going to give it to him when he's older :)
ReplyDeleteI am a fan already! I love this poem and I can't pick out many major changes to be made...very inspirational, very kind. Really nice work.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very good poem and it was very discriptive. I liked it a lot.
ReplyDeletethat was a very nice poem... i love little kids, they got those little cheeks and their cute smile and they always cheer you up :D i have a little cusion named owen and he has autisum... but he is fun to play with and he is very cute so i know what it feels like to have a little goober runing around rofl...
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really sweet, and well written. It was neat how your poem in itself seemed to be, to me, an example of some of the messages you portrayed, such as kindness. Again, I really did enjoy this poem, and you did a wonderful job in writing it.
ReplyDeleteNice job! i can really tell you love and care for your little brother through this piece. I really enjoyed the word choices that you used! keep it up, good job.
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