I wrote this about a year ago, but I like it so I decided to post it. Please give any type of feedback.
I step out into the biting cold
Into the black night
My eyes cannot see
But my heart is still beating
And i know i have to come face to face with myself
The other me
The me that is cold-hearted and uncaring
And discovered jealousy and hatered
The part of me that shut the world and loved ones away
I must let this side of myself go
To forever disappear into the depths of the darkness
Never to return again
I let go
The clouds, that looked like giant boulders in the midnight sky now part
The bright moon smiles down at me
The wind wraps me in its arms
Swirling away wild strands of hair from my eyes
I can see again
As the moonlight embraces me in it's white glow
The stars twinkle happily against the night time sky
As if the sky is saying 'I love you'
My spirit breaks free
I know that reminising is meant to be happy
The past is over
I am no-longer trapped behind the iron bars
In the dungeon of my darkest memories
Watching the bitter-sweet image of yestardays angels fly by me
As I lay stuck, in the prision of my mind
I know that tomorrow the sun will rise and awaken the earth with new beginnings
I know that rain will fall
Washing away my mistakes
Gracing me with forgivness
And i know the stars will be there
I will not always be able to see them
But they are there
Whispering beautiful little words in prayers of hope for a more joyful future
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I think this is a very good poem. It expresses your feelings very well.
ReplyDeleteooh its soo pretty and descriptive i love it!
ReplyDeleteReally nice job!
ReplyDeleteWell done! The correlation between each feeling, and each part of the natural day, was well portrayed, and the piece flowed quite well. Good job-it is a thoughtful poem, and nicely phrased!
ReplyDeleteWow probably one of my favorite that you have written. It's funny how a lot of the feelings you experience I have experienced in the past. Keep up the good work.
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